Thursday, January 12, 2006
trees
In the anxious hours between light and dark, when insomnia cracks its whip and finally drives me from my bed to sit alone in my living room, I look to the trees that line my street for comfort. Though solid and stoic during daylight hours, at night these Midwestern Maples become dancers in the Beijing Ballet. Lifted by the streetlights, their branches reach up, casting bamboo-like shadows upon my wall; soft chiaroscuro images that sway and sashay insomnia out the door and lull me once again into the safety of sleep.
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chiaroscuro - Italian for "light-dark." - for those of us who also don't know what it is. It is a great word to use there. I wish I had a place likethis for my insomnia! Though I know you had to force yourself to write, it was well worth it. I am glad you did!
I really like the use of alliteration in Midwest maples and Beijing Ballet. The way that these two descriptors are poetically set apart form the rest of the paragraph draws attention to the dreamy feeling of half-sleep. It reminds me of Nutcracker-esque dreaming.
Beautiful!
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Beautiful!
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