Sunday, February 05, 2006
"allow it to take you to unexpected places..."
My wound is geography. It is also my anchorage, my port of call.
Pat Conroy Prince of Tides
My wound is geography… I had copied this opening line after reading Conroy’s book years ago. I had carried it in my purse for a long while, comforted somehow that someone had identified the cause of my pain. Consequently, when I read this week’s assignment I immediately thought of this line. But although I struggled for hours (more than I care to admit), I could not follow Conroy’s pros without sounding overly dramatic and clumsy. As I analyzed the sentence, I realized that part of the problem was that technically it did not work. It did not fit the pattern of sentences using a “to be” verb; that is, the predicate is neither a subject complement (the wound is infected…) nor is it adverbial (the wound is in his leg…). My struggle over stepping into Conroy’s word-prints, however, was not simply a technical one. I could not wax lyrical about “my wound is geography” because I realized that my pain had stemmed not from being landlocked thousands of miles from family—not a trace of salt in the air—but from being trapped in an unhappy marriage with two small children. That I was far from home only added salt to the wound. Ironically, the second part of Conroy’s opening line proved to be prophetic. The fact that I had traveled and lived in many places strengthened my ties with my family in England, and ultimately gave me the courage to make the necessary changes in my life.
Pat Conroy Prince of Tides
My wound is geography… I had copied this opening line after reading Conroy’s book years ago. I had carried it in my purse for a long while, comforted somehow that someone had identified the cause of my pain. Consequently, when I read this week’s assignment I immediately thought of this line. But although I struggled for hours (more than I care to admit), I could not follow Conroy’s pros without sounding overly dramatic and clumsy. As I analyzed the sentence, I realized that part of the problem was that technically it did not work. It did not fit the pattern of sentences using a “to be” verb; that is, the predicate is neither a subject complement (the wound is infected…) nor is it adverbial (the wound is in his leg…). My struggle over stepping into Conroy’s word-prints, however, was not simply a technical one. I could not wax lyrical about “my wound is geography” because I realized that my pain had stemmed not from being landlocked thousands of miles from family—not a trace of salt in the air—but from being trapped in an unhappy marriage with two small children. That I was far from home only added salt to the wound. Ironically, the second part of Conroy’s opening line proved to be prophetic. The fact that I had traveled and lived in many places strengthened my ties with my family in England, and ultimately gave me the courage to make the necessary changes in my life.
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Wow Catherine, that is so personal and powerful..
I was also moved to make change sin my life by a few words in abook that I read. Like you, it took some time for it happen, but the words still ring in my headf when I ask myself why I have done what I have done. Your quote is amazing, I think I will keep it.
I was also moved to make change sin my life by a few words in abook that I read. Like you, it took some time for it happen, but the words still ring in my headf when I ask myself why I have done what I have done. Your quote is amazing, I think I will keep it.
Catherine, reading these words brings similar emotions and pains to me. I think that only those of us who have lived so far away from family can really understand this feeling, but your words go a long way towards helping others see. I liked it. I think Geography can be a wound.
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